What do you think about the idea of using celebrities in promoting companies or products?
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Promoting is important factor in marketing. Only competing with quality of products is different because image of brands or products is also factor which affects to customer’s choice. There are diverse methods to promote products, and using celebrities is one of them.
Using celebrities has advantages and disadvantages both.
First, it is one of the easiest methods to promote because it can be exposed many people relatively in short time to use popularity of celebrities.
Also, positive image of celebrities can become image of the products promoted like truth. Fir example, if we heard a same basketball shoes which Jorden wear it, we want to buy it.
However, it also have disadvantages. Once, the more famous celebrities are, the more money it need. It is not cost effectiveness method.
Also, the effect can be temporary. So the quality is very important to maintain the promoting effect. Sometimes, companies may overlook the more important factor because budget is limited.
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Promoting is important factor in marketing.
>>CORRECT!
Only competing with quality of products is different because image of brands or products is also factor which affects to customer’s choice.
>>Only competing with quality of products is different because image of brands or products is also factor which affects customer’s choice.
There are diverse methods to promote products, and using celebrities is one of them.
>>CORRECT!
Using celebrities has advantages and disadvantages both.
>>Using celebrities have both advantages and disadvantages.
>>CORRECT!
Using celebrities has advantages and disadvantages both.
>>Using celebrities have both advantages and disadvantages.
First, it is one of the easiest methods to promote because it can be exposed many people relatively in short time to use popularity of celebrities.
>>First, it is one of the easiest methods to promote because it can be exposed to many people relatively in short time to use popularity of celebrities.
Also, positive image of celebrities can become image of the products promoted like truth.
>>Also, positive image of celebrities can become an image of the products promoted like the truth.
Fir example, if we heard a same basketball shoes which Jorden wear it, we want to buy it.
>>For example, if we heard the same basketball shoes which Jordan wear it, we want to buy it.
However, it also have disadvantages.
>>For example, if we heard the same basketball shoes which Jordan wear it, we want to buy it.
However, it also have disadvantages.
>>However, it also has disadvantages.
Once, the more famous celebrities are, the more money it need.
>> Once, the more famous celebrities are, the more money it needs.
It is not cost effectiveness method.
>>It is not an effective method.
Also, the effect can be temporary.
>>It is not an effective method.
Also, the effect can be temporary.
>>CORRECT!
So the quality is very important to maintain the promoting effect.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes, companies may overlook the more important factor because budget is limited.
>>CORRECT!
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