What do you think about the playgrounds in Korea? Are they child-friendly and safe?
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I think that the playgrounds in Korea are safe. There is nothing special dangerous for children. Also, they have cushion on the floor. So I think that the playgrounds in Korea are safe.
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I think that the playgrounds in Korea are safe.
>> correct~~
There is nothing special dangerous for children.
>> There is nothing particularly dangerous for children.
Also, they have cushions on the floor.
>> correct~~
So I think that the playgrounds in Korea are safe.
>> correct~~
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