What do you think about the war between America and Iran?
학생이 쓴 원문
As I know, Iran launched the missile to American military and release the article that 80 of United States Armys were killed.
But, the USA said that no one was dead.
I think, the direct war is not going to happen but there will going to economic war. so the price of some resources will rised such as oil.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You are right! Iran is among the top producers of oil. China also recognizes that.
So, probably, Iran will be more strict to which countries they will supply with their resources.
Here are the corrections.
As I know, Iran launched the missile to American military and release the article that 80 of United States Armys were killed.
>> As far as I know, Iran launched the missile to American military and released the article that 80 of United States Armies were killed.
But, the USA said that no one was dead.
>> Correct!
I think, the direct war is not going to happen but there will going to economic war. so the price of some resources will rised such as oil.
>> I think, the direct war is not going to happen, but there will be economic war. So, the price of some resources will rise such as oil.
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