What do you think about the war between America and Iran? What will be the implication of this happe
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1.I think America government is policy trouble with lran.Frist attack is lran.
I dont\'t want war.I hope their think to me.
2.I went to the army 2 years ago.
I believe they\'re not really war.
The war is Interests.
So If they want to get it.It\'s done.
I want to sensible choice theirself.
They have Nuclears.
Nuclears are horrible until the end of war.
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Hey there, JO!
While reading your answers, it frightens me about what may happen in the future if countries declare war.
I couldn\'t imagine how young children would feel and protect themselves. I feel really, really sad and scared.
Anyway, here are the corrections.
I think America government is policy trouble with lran.Frist attack is lran.
>> I think the American government has a policy trouble with lran. The first attack is from lran.
I dont\'t want war.I hope their think to me.
>> I don\'t want war. I hope their thought is same with me.
I went to the army 2 years ago.
>> Correct!
I believe they\'re not really war.
>> I believe they\'re not really at war.
The war is Interests.
( Your idea here is not clear. )
So If they want to get it.It\'s done.
>> So, if they want to get it, it\'s done.
I want to sensible choice theirself.
>> I want their sensible choice.
They have Nuclears.
>> They have nuclear weapons.
Nuclears are horrible until the end of war.
>> Nuclear weapons are horrible until the end of war.
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