What do you think about violence in sports?
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For me, it\'s a rugby. It\'s a kind of different between the USA and Australia. Rugby\'s players have wore protective equipment in the USA, they haven\'t in Australia. But, the USA rugby is more dangerous than Australia even if they have wore it. That\'s why I think it\'s the most violence sport [이름]ce the death rate of players is very high. However, I hope I want to see the rugby at Suncorp Stadium in Australia.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
For me, it\'s a rugby.
>> CORRECT!It\'s a kind of different between the USA and Australia.
>> CORRECT!Rugby\'s players have wore protective equipment in the USA, they haven\'t in Australia.
>> Rugby\'s players wear protective equipment in the USA, but they don\'t in Australia.
But, the USA rugby is more dangerous than Australia even if they have wore it.
>> CORRECT!That\'s why I think it\'s the most violence sport [이름]ce the death rate of players is very high.
>> That\'s why I think it\'s the most violent sport [이름]ce the death rate of players is very high.
However, I hope I want to see the rugby at Suncorp Stadium in Australia.
>> CORRECT!
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