What do you think about volunteer work?
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What do you think about volunteer work?
I think it is the most valuable and generous things that we can do.
>>I think it is the most valuable and generous thing that we can do.
or>>In my opinion, this is the most noble thing that a human being can do.
There is no returns, but we only want to spend time to help others.
>>The person may not be able to return the gesture back, but we only want to give our time just to help others.
It is like the blessing of God that given to human, so that we can make human being noble.
>>It is just like the blessing from God above that is given to humans, so that we also, the human race can do noble things like our God.
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