What do you think about voting? Is it a good way to make decisions about important matters? Why? Why
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I think voting is a good thing.
Yes, that\'s a good way to make decisions about important issues because citizens might get angry if someone like a court politician decides it\'s important. So I think it\'s a good idea to vote according to their thoughts.
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I think voting is a good thing.
>> CORRECT!
Yes, that\'s a good way to make decisions about important issues because citizens might get angry if someone like a court politician decides it\'s important.
>> CORRECT!
So I think it\'s a good idea to vote according to their thoughts.
>> So, I think it\'s a good idea to vote according to their thoughts.
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