What do you think about Wednesdays? :)

2019-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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In my case, generally, Wednesday makes me start the day in a positive way. Because everyone wants a weekend, Wednesday means the weekend is coming soon, so I feel good and excited.On the other hand, I have a lot of classes on Wednesday to make no classes on Friday at the university, so it is also the most tired and busy day.

강사 첨삭

You are getting the hang of writing my dear!! ^_^

In my case, generally, Wednesday makes me start the day in a positive way. 
>> Correct.

Because everyone wants a weekend, Wednesday means the weekend is coming soon, so I feel good and excited.
>> It is because, everyone wants the weekend. Wednesday means the weekend is coming soon, so I feel good and excited.

On the other hand, I have a lot of classes on Wednesday to make no classes on Friday at the university, so it is also the most tired and busy day.
>> On the other hand, I have a lot of classes on Wednesday. For me not to have classes on Friday, I need to go to these classes at the university. It generally makes me tired since I get very busy.

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