What do you think about working four days a week?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion,
If I work four days a week, I can do something a lot what I want to do.
because I have a lot of free of time but I spend a lot of money.
강사 첨삭
Great job for doing your homework Julia!
I appreciate your effort of doing them. Keep up the good work and for sharing your thought.
Aki~
In my opinion, If I work four days a week, I can do something a lot what I want to do.>>> CORRECT
because I have a lot of free of time but I spend a lot of money.
because I have a lot of free of time but I spend a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT
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