What do you think are some good manners?

2020-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I think there are many cases of good manners. For example helping others, give your seat to the old, be polite, be on time and so on. These manners can impress other people and it would help you to be successful in relationship, career and your whole life. There is a famous saying ‘Manners maketh man’ and I think good manners can enrich your life.

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I think there are many cases of good manners. 
>>> CORRECT =) 

For example helping others, give your seat to the old, be polite, be on time and so on. 
>>> For example, helping others, giving your seat to the old, being polite, being on time and so on. 

These manners can impress other people and it would help you to be successful in relationship, career and your whole life. 
>>> These manners can impress other people and it would help you to be successful in relationships, career, and your whole life. 

There is a famous saying ‘Manners maketh man’ and I think good manners can enrich your life.
>>> CORRECT =) 

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