What do you think are some health care problems in your country?
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These days, due to advances in medical technology, various drugs have been developed. In old mans cases, they have a variety of diseases, so they take too much medicine. This situation called “Poly-pharmarcy”. It’s not the only our country’s problem, I think.
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Hi Miss. [Name] [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleThese days, due to advances in medical technology, various drugs have been developed.
>> CORRECT!In old mans cases, they have a variety of diseases, so they take too much medicine.
>> In old men\'s cases, they have a variety of disease, so they take too much medicine.
This situation called “Poly-pharmarcy”.
>> CORRECT!
It’s not the only our country’s problem, I think.
>> CORRECT!
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