What do you think are the acceptable reasons for breaking off a marriage promise?
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Basically breaking off a marriage promise is bever occured in our life at least for our dauter and son.
If we has a reason of breaking off a marrige promise, it is only acceptable when my life partner meet other man or cause violence.
But the most important is a disappering belive.
Belives is mer important in husband and wife.
If it is not existence, they will not happy and will often fight each other.
May be I can accept the breaking off a marriage promise just in theses case.
Becuase that is too bad not only me but my son and dauter.
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I like how you were able to express well your ideas.
Yes, I also believe that parents should also think about their children\'s welfare before they do something irrational.
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Basically breaking off a marriage promise is bever occured in our life at least for our dauter and son.
>>Basically, breaking off a marriage promise never incurred at least to our daughter and son. (Is this what you mean?)If we has a reason of breaking off a marrige promise, it is only acceptable when my life partner meet other man or cause violence.
>>If we have a reason for breaking off a marriage promise, it is only acceptable when one\'s partner met another person and/or has caused violence.But the most important is a disappering belive.
>>But the most important is the disappearing belief.Belives is mer important in husband and wife.
>>Beliefs are more important in a husband and a wife.If it is not existence, they will not happy and will often fight each other.
>>If it doesn\'t exist, they will not be happy and will often fight with each other.May be I can accept the breaking off a marriage promise just in theses case.
>>Maybe I can accept breaking off a marriage promise with these cases.Becuase that is too bad not only me but my son and dauter.
>>Because that will be too bad not only for me but also for my kids.
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