What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?
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the advantages is you can easily get speaking skills about that country.but that\'s it. I think disadvantages is more than advantages. one if you don\'t speak language which you go, it\'s very hard to get friends. so you probably feel alone. two you need a lot of money. because you should pay tuition and living expenses. three if you are in trouble in abroad, you should handle it with no help. so I don\'t like to go abroad to only study.
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Hi [이름]! That\'s true. There are times that you would feel homesick. But nothing compares to the knowledge that you may gain from studying abroad. A small sacrifice would lead to a comfortable life in the future. :)
the advantages is you can easily get speaking skills about that country.but that\'s it.
>>The advantage is that you can easily learn the language in that country and adapt to it.
I think disadvantages is more than advantages.
>> Although, I think there are more disadvantage than advantages.
one if you don\'t speak language which you go, it\'s very hard to get friends.
>> First is that, if you are not fluent in their native language, it would be hard to make friends.
so you probably feel alone. two you need a lot of money.
>> With that, you would probably feel alone. Second is that, you need a lot of money because of your tuition fee and daily expenses.
because you should pay tuition and living expenses.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
three if you are in trouble in abroad, you should handle it with no help.
>> If you are also in trouble abroad, you need to handle it on your own.
so I don\'t like to go abroad to only study.
>> That\'s why I don\'t want to study abroad.
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