What do you think are the benefits of studying English as a second language?
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Thank you for accomplishing your first composition homework. Most of your sentences are correct so I just provided alternative answers. Congratulations and thank you for the effort. I\'m looking forward to reading more of your thoughts and ideas in the future. See you later in class! ^^
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1. If I study English as a second language in Korea, my English skill must be high.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Good English skills are a requirement to study English as a second language in Korea.
2. Actually English is not a second language in Korea, it is just one of many subjects.
>> Actually, English is not even considered as second language in Korea. It is just one of many subjects.
3. Focusing on school grammar, most Korean students are good at text English rather than action English.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Because most Korean students focus more on grammar, they are only good at grammar and not on the actual application of the language.
4. If someone has a good English skill, she/he can get a good job all over the world and can have lots of opportunities to do anything.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: More job opportunities open up for people who have good English skills.
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