What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific reasons and examples to support
학생이 쓴 원문
I think play soccer is reducing stress.Becuase when we kick the ball can be reduce stress.When we have stress,we are very angry.So,we want revenge something.The soccerball is not response anything.Just run itself.So,I think it is best to reducing stress.
<English Letter>
Dear [Name],
Do you know folding the scab? If you know folding the scab please teach me.I usually play computergame.So,I want to play scab.I think it would be nice.But I can't folding the scab.You know, I am not good at folding.
[이름]
Dear Teacher Liza,
Why are you quit the Power English and what will you do?I am very wonder.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear, [이름]^^
Why are you still up? Busy studying? I hope so.
Anyways, thanks for doing your homework.
I am leaving Power English because I have to live with my parent in another
city. As you know my mom often gets sick so I have to look after her. I hope
you understand it my dear. I am really sorry.
I hate so say goodbye my dear. I will never forget you!
(kkk. Too early for goodbyes... but it\'s wanting me to cry. T_T)
See you later my dear^^
Teacher Liza
I think play soccer is reducing stress.
>> I think playing soccer could reduce my stress.
Becuase when we kick the ball can be reduce stress.
>> Because when we kick the ball it could help reduce our stress.
When we have stress,we are very angry.
>> When we are stress we are very angry.
So,we want revenge something.>> So we want to revenge on something.
The soccerball is not response anything.>> The soccer ball will not respond at all.
Just run itself.So,I think it is best to reducing stress.
>> It will just roll over the ground so I thing this is the best way to reduce one\'s stress.
<English Letter>
Dear [Name],
Do you know folding the scab? If you know folding the scab please teach me.I usually play computergame.So,I want to play scab.I think it would be nice.But I can\'t folding the scab.You know, I am not good at folding.
>>Do you know how to fold a scab? If you know please teach me. I usually play computer games so, I want to play scab this time. I think it would be nice. But I can\'t fold a scab.You know, I am not good at folding.[이름]
Dear Teacher Liza,
Why are you quit the Power English and what will you do?I am very wonder.
>> Why are quitting from Power English? What will you do next? I am just wondering.
[이름]
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