What do you think are the disadvantages and advantages of living alone?
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I believe there are advantages a lot to live a lone. There is no one who interferes to me like my mom. I could feel freedom out of bothering things to me. Also, taking a rest only in my place too. But disadvantages I live alone are that it could make me feel lonely and I could get a depression. So, in current generation, there are people who have the pets in Korea these days.
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I believe there are advantages a lot to live a lone.
>>> I believe there are many advantages to living alone.
There is no one who interferes to me like my mom.
>>> There is no one who interferes with me like my mom.
I could feel freedom out of bothering things to me.
>>> I have freedom if I live alone.
Also, taking a rest only in my place too.
>>> Also, I\'m taking a rest only at my place.
But disadvantages I live alone are that it could make me feel lonely and I could get a depression.
>>> But the disadvantages of living alone are that it could make me feel lonely and I could get depressed.
So, in current generation, there are people who have the pets in Korea these days.
>>> So, in the current generation, there are people who have pets in Korea these days.
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