What do you think are the main causes of accidents on the road?
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I think there are several reasons of accidents on the road in here. First, the process of getting a drive license is easier than other countries.
A repoter showed video cripts including pass the exam for the drive license to the foreighers and asked the foreighers that what they do in a video cripts?. The viewer said that before taking a exam, they looked like practice. But it was done to get a license. the results of faster and easier test would be causesd for an accident.
Second, there are some parked car on both side of road. Especially infont of school, It obstruct drivers view when the pedestrian suddenly indicated through the parked car.
Actually it is not possible to install CCTV over the traffic light, So the driver have to keep the rules like speed and pricipals. I think it is best way to decrease of car accidents.
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Hi JM!
Thanks for sending your homework.
Cheers,
Jean~~
I think there are several reasons of accidents on the road in here.
>> I think there are several causes of accidents on the road in my region.
First, the processing of get a drive license is easier than other countries.
>> First, the processing of driver\'s license is easier than in other countries.
A repoter showed video cripts including processing of pass the exam for the drive license to the foreighers and asked the foreighers that what they do in a video cripts?.
>> A reporter showed video clips including the method of passing the driver\'s license exam to the foreigners and asked them that what they do.
The viewer said that before taking a exam, they looked like trying to practice. But it was done to get a license. the results of faster and easier test would be causes of accident.
>> The viewer said that before taking an exam, they looked like they were trying to practice, but they were actually trying to get their license. Giving a faster and easier test would cause more accidents.
Second, there are some parked car on both side of road. Especially infont of school, It obstruct drivers view when the pedestrian suddenly indicated through the parked car.
>> Second, double parking on streets is quite common, especially in front of schools, which obstructs the driver\'s view when the pedestrian suddenly tries to catch the attention of the driver of the parked car.
Actually it is not possible to install CCTV over the traffic light, So the driver have to keep the rules like speed and pricipals. I think it is best way to decrease of car accidents.
>> In fact, it is not possible to install CCTV over the traffic light, so the driver has to be disciplined or follow the rules like speeding. I believe this is the best way to decrease the number of car accidents.
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