What do you think are the most common reasons for kids your age to feel burned out? Explain.
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I think these days, because the education system in Korea is harsh, kids feel burned out.
And especially nowadays, because we have online classes, it\'s more harder since there\'s no teacher to help us.
So the study is hard and pressure makes kids more stressed out.
Also about their relationship.
Since we have to study, we will feel like we are far away from our friends.
And not mine, but some of my friend\'s mum keeps treating her like a studying machine.
But I think we have hard times in our lives- and we have to get over it.
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What do you think are the most common reasons for kids your age to feel burned out? Explain.
I think these days, because the education system in Korea is harsh, kids feel burned out.
>>> I think these days, kids are burned out because the education system in Korea is too strict.
And especially nowadays, because we have online classes, it\'s more harder since there\'s no teacher to help us.
>>> Especially because we have online classes, it\'s harder since there\'s no teacher to help us.
So the study is hard and pressure makes kids more stressed out.
Also about their relationship.
>>> Studying is already hard and pressure makes it even worse that is why kids feel more stressed out. Including their social relationships.
Since we have to study, we will feel like we are far away from our friends.
>>> Since we have to study, we will be away/ apart from our friends and that will make us sad.
And not mine, but some of my friend\'s mum keeps treating her like a studying machine.
>>> Not in my case, but some of my friend\'s mom keeps on treating them like a studying machine.
But I think we have hard times in our lives- and we have to get over it.
>>> Overall, I think we all have our hard times in our lives all we have to do is to get over them.
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