What do you think are the most dangerous jobs?
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Well, as far as I can remember, I\'ve already posted this question before. But, let see the different way. I guess there are many dangerous jobs such as construction worker, pilot, lumberjack, and fisherman. I believe what these jobs have in common is that they can be life-threatening. It could cause whenever possible.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Well, as far as I can remember, I\'ve already posted this question before.
>> CORRECT!But, let see the different way.
>> CORRECT!I guess there are many dangerous jobs such as construction worker, pilot, lumberjack, and fisherman.
>> CORRECT!I believe what these jobs have in common is that they can be life-threatening.
>> CORRECT!It could cause whenever possible.
>> It could cost their lives whenever possible.
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