What do you think are the most unusual pets that people have?
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I have heard the Fennec fox that people raise to pets. Basically, the Fennec fox is weak to stress. Even it is impossible to raise the Fennec fox in Korea. But we can see the video to be raised Fennec fox for pet in YouTube sometimes. Some contrys are possible to raise the Fennex fox. The Fennex fox\'s personality to be raised on humans\' hands is similar to half and half between cats to dogs. I\'m not sure if it is suitable as pet to Fennex fox, but I hope all their\'s happy. Personally, I respect who raises mostly unusall pets (I even think spiders are beautiful). But it\'s too hard to see bugs with antennae. For example, cockroaches.
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I have heard the Fennec fox that people raise to pets.
>> I have heard the Fennec fox is raised as pets.
Basically, the Fennec fox is weak to stress.
>> CORRECT!Basically, the Fennec fox is weak to stress.
Even it is impossible to raise the Fennec fox in Korea.
>> It is impossible to raise a Fennec fox in Korea.
But we can see the video to be raised Fennec fox for pet in YouTube sometimes.
>> But we can see videos on how to raise a Fennec fox as pets in YouTube sometimes.
Some contrys are possible to raise the Fennex fox.
>> It\'s possible for some countries to raise a Fennec Fox.
The Fennex fox\'s personality to be raised on humans\' hands is similar to half and half between cats to dogs.
The Fennex fox\'s personality to be raised on humans\' hands is similar to half and half between cats to dogs.
>> The Fennec fox\'s personality, when raised by humans, is similar to cats and dogs.
I\'m not sure if it is suitable as pet to Fennex fox, but I hope all their\'s happy.
>> I\'m not sure if it is suitable to have Fennec Foxes as pets, but I hope all they\'re happy.
Personally, I respect who raises mostly unusall pets (I even think spiders are beautiful).
I\'m not sure if it is suitable as pet to Fennex fox, but I hope all their\'s happy.
>> I\'m not sure if it is suitable to have Fennec Foxes as pets, but I hope all they\'re happy.
Personally, I respect who raises mostly unusall pets (I even think spiders are beautiful).
>> Personally, I respect who raises mostly unusual pets (I even think spiders are beautiful).
But it\'s too hard to see bugs with antennae. For example, cockroaches.
>> CORRECT!
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