What do you think are the pros and cons of being a competitive person?
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The advantage of a competitive person is that it can be someone\'s goal or stimulus.
You can see someone who is competitive and think about how to act and what to prepare for, and you can set goals based on that behavior.
You can also become a stimulant to yourself and create a more effortful posture.
But the downside of a competitive person is that they are selfish and can also keep themselves in a compulsion.
You will become selfish as you come to think of yourself as somethink great, and you will able to obsessively obsess over yourself to become a more competitive person.
Not all competitive people will necessarily be, but I think it may be.
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Hi!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me regarding your thoughts on the pros and cons of being a competitive person.
Thank you for sharing your answer with me regarding your thoughts on the pros and cons of being a competitive person.
I really appreciate it. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
~ Teacher Gina
The advantage of a competitive person is that it can be someone\'s goal or stimulus.
>> The advantage of a competitive person is that they can be someone’s goal or motivation.
You can see someone who is competitive and think about how to act and what to prepare for, and you can set goals based on that behavior.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: By observing a competitive person, you can think about how to act, what to prepare for, and set goals based on their behavior.
You can also become a stimulant to yourself and create a more effortful posture.
>> You can also motivate yourself and develop a more determined attitude.
But the downside of a competitive person is that they are selfish and can also keep themselves in a compulsion.
>> But the downside of being competitive is that they may become selfish and trap themselves in compulsive behavior.
You will become selfish as you come to think of yourself as somethink great, and you will able to obsessively obsess over yourself to become a more competitive person.
>> You may become selfish if you start thinking of yourself as something great, and you might obsess over yourself to stay competitive.
Not all competitive people will necessarily be, but I think it may be.
>> Not all competitive people are necessarily like this, but I think it can happen.
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