What do you think are the qualities of a good entrepreneur? Explain each in detail.
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I think that an entrepreneur must be creative and open-minded to succeed in his or her businesses.
First, the competition among companies are increasng these days and everybody tries to look for the blue ocean that promises a high profit in his or her businesses. If entrepreneurs want to survive in a harsh competition, they should be creative to satisfy their customers' needs. It means that leaders in companies should read the trends in a market, and make new ideas to match their customers' needs.
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Thanks for the lesson [이름]!
Does this apply to you? Do you think you are creative and open-minded enough to run your own business?
If so, what do most Koreans need these days? What kind of business are you likely to run?
Oh my, I got tons of questions for you here, [이름], and hopefully you can answer them next time.
Just let me know if you still want us to talk about this.
Honestly speaking, I am not a very good entrepreneur. My entrepreneurial skills are likely below average because though I can say that I am creative and open-minded, I lack THE COURAGE TO TAKE RISKS. In my opinion, this should really work hand in hand with what you have just mentioned.
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree with my point of view?
I\'ll catch you then next week and if you don\'t mind you may also answer my questions here.
Thank you [이름]!
Enjoy the rest of the day and may you have a great weekend ahead!
_Klein
I think that an entrepreneur must be creative and open-minded to succeed in his or her businesses. >>Correct!First, the competition among companies are increasng these days and everybody tries to look for the blue ocean that promises a high profit in his or her businesses.
>>First, competition among companies is increasing these days and everybody tries to look for the blue ocean that promises a high profit in his or her businesses.
>>First, competition among companies is getting tougher these days and everybody tries to look for the blue ocean that promises a high profit in his or her businesses.
If entrepreneurs want to survive in a harsh competition, they should be creative to satisfy their customers\' needs.
>>Correct!
It means that leaders in companies should read the trends in a market, and make new ideas to match their customers\' needs.
>>Correct
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