What do you think are the reasons why people who eat alone do not eat enough?

2020-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

I live alone, so I can say well about that by my experience. First, it is difficult to care by themselves if they live alone. If they can’t eat enough, no one can know about that. So, it is easy environment to be indifferent for people who live alone. Also, people who live alone consume something less than usual family consisted three or four people. But, grocery store like supermarket sell amount of groceries for usual family. If single household buy groceries for cooking food, the groceries will be left and they have difficulty treating residual groceries. Thus, they will be avoid to cook in house and also they will be hard to eat nutrient food.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Se [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


I live alone, so I can say well about that by my experience.

>>CORRECT!

>>I live alone, so I can say well about my experiences.

 First, it is difficult to care by themselves if they live alone.

>>CORRECT!


 If they can’t eat enough, no one can know about that.

>>CORRECT!

>>No one can know about it if they can\'t eat enough.


So, it is easy environment to be indifferent for people who live alone.

>>CORRECT!


 Also, people who live alone consume something less than usual family consisted three or four people.

>>Also, people who live alone consume something less than usual family consisted of three or four people.


But, grocery store like supermarket sell amount of groceries for usual family.

>> But, grocery stores like supermarket sell amount of groceries for usual family.


 If single household buy groceries for cooking food, the groceries will be left and they have difficulty treating residual groceries.

>>CORRECT!


Thus, they will be avoid to cook in house and also they will be hard to eat nutrient food.

>>Thus, they will avoid to cook in houses and also, they will not to eat nutritious food.

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