What do you think are the roles of idols to people
학생이 쓴 원문
hmm, Teacher!
idol is mean K-POP STAR or sports STAR?
HAHA ^_^
They give me the strength to live when I am in trouble.
When I hear the news from media, watching TV, Makes me happy.
and, I always wish them well.
I like K-pop Star, and Movie Star, Sports Star,
IU, TWICE, LEE BYEONG HUN? And famous super star Cristiano RONALDO, SON-HEONG-MIN.
AND R.I.P Kobe bryant.
It seems to be off topic, but thanks for reading.
always thank you for your teaching.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Idol means the people you look up to who are famous in any field.
So yes, K-pop stars and sports stars are included as being idols.
It\'s not boring to read your homework so feel free to write whatever you want to write. :)
~Teacher Sheila
They give me the strength to live when I am in trouble.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They give me strength when I\'m feeling down.
When I hear the news from media, watching TV, Makes me happy.
>>When I hear the news from the media, watching TV makes me happy.
OR>>Watching TV about news from the media makes me happy.
and, I always wish them well.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I always wish them well.
I like K-pop Star, and Movie Star, Sports Star,
>>I like K-pop stars, movie stars, and sports stars.
IU, TWICE, LEE BYEONG HUN? And famous super star Cristiano RONALDO, SON-HEONG-MIN.
AND R.I.P Kobe bryant.
>>I like IU, TWICE, Lee Byeong Hun, famous super stars Cristiano Ronaldo, Son Heong Min, and Kobe Bryant.
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