What do you think are the things help people to get jobs? What things prevent them from getting jobs
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of test to get a job in here. That mean Eventhough candidates took a notification which passed their resume, they have to pass job interview, presentation and exam with other candidates. To become a strong candidate, they have to show thier abilities to the interviewer by handing in related at least certificates, diploma of specific univ and bilingual test record. Once some get a chance to do job interview, most people will try to introduce themselves politely, confidentlyand in a speciality. To prevent them from getting job, It is neceessary to answer accurately following several questions and issue contents. Dispite knowing that getting a job is so hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Applying for a job is definitely quite challenging, especially in a very competitive society. One must be fully prepared for it.
- T. Beth
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There are a lot of test to get a job in here. >>> There are a lot of tests one must take to get a job in here.
That mean Eventhough candidates took a notification which passed their resume, they have to pass job interview, presentation and exam with other candidates.
>>> That means, even though candidates passed the resume screening, they have to pass job interview, presentation and exam with other candidates.
To become a strong candidate, they have to show thier abilities to the interviewer by handing in related at least certificates, diploma of specific univ and bilingual test record.
>>> To become a strong candidate, they have to show their abilities to the interviewer by handing in related certifications, diploma of specific univ and bilingual test record.
Once some get a chance to do job interview, most people will try to introduce themselves politely, confidentlyand in a speciality.
>>> Once they get a chance to do the job interview, most people will try to introduce themselves politely, confidently and in a special way.
To prevent them from getting job, It is neceessary to answer accurately following several questions and issue contents.
>>> In order for them to get the job, It is necessary to answer the following several questions and issue contents accurately.
Dispite knowing that getting a job is so hard.
>>> Despite knowing that getting a job is quite hard.
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