What do you think are the three most important or interesting inventions?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think are the three most important or interesting inventions?
I think ...
The first is a car.
The second is a gas stove.
The third is the flush toilet.
I think these are the most important things that makes human life.
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I think ...
The first is a car.
>> I think the first one is a car.
The second is a gas stove.
>> Second is a gas stove.
The third is the flush toilet.
>> Third is the toilet.
I think these are the most important things that makes human life.
>> I think these are the most important things that make human life more comfortable.
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