What do you think are the worst fears?

2023-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Absolutely, it\'s getting older. When I was teen, I hoped to be an adult early. But, when I became that. Time flies so fast as I don\'t expect. In addition to that, being an adult means to add the responsibility more. Just, something that I really miss is the child of memory. At that time, I didn\'t take care of anything else like making a living, paying a tax, and bill. And the another worst fear I guess is to lose my parents. As far as I know, it should happen even if I don\'t want it. And I don\'t know when it goes. That\'s why it makes me feared.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Absolutely, it\'s getting older. 
>> CORRECT!
When I was teen, I hoped to be an adult early. 
>> When I was a teen, I hoped to be an adult early. 
But, when I became that. Time flies so fast as I don\'t expect. 
>> But, when I became that, time flew so fast as I don\'t expect it. 
In addition to that, being an adult means to add the responsibility more. 
>> CORRECT!
Just, something that I really miss is the child of memory. 
>> Just, something that I really miss is my childhood memory. 
At that time, I didn\'t take care of anything else like making a living, paying a tax, and bill.
>> CORRECT!
And the another worst fear I guess is to lose my parents. 
>> And, another of my worst fears I guess is to lose my parents. 
As far as I know, it should happen even if I don\'t want it. 
>> CORRECT!
And I don\'t know when it goes. 
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why it makes me feared.
>> That\'s why it makes me scared.

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