What do you think are/would be the advantages and disadvantages of being your own boss? Discuss in 3
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope to get my own label in the future.
In my case, I think I can run the company in my way.
I can focus on my atheistic way whenever I start new collections.
However, I should consider business jobs not only designing clothes.
Also, I need to pay for my employees every months which will be big pressure.
Running own business requires a lot of responsibility.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Yu [이름]. You did a fantastic job on your homework. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the advantages and disadvantages of having your own company. I wish you all the best in your future and in having your own label. Good job! See you in class. ~teacher Jane
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In my case, I think I can run the company in my way.
>>> CORRECT
I can focus on my atheistic way whenever I start new collections.
>>> I can focus on my aesthetic way whenever I start new collections.
However, I should consider business jobs not only designing clothes.
>>> However, I should consider starting a business not only designing clothes.
Also, I need to pay for my employees every months which will be big pressure.
>>> Also, I need to pay my employees every month which will give me much pressure.
Running own business requires a lot of responsibility.
>>> Running my own business requires a lot of responsibility.
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