what do you think are your strengthens and weaknesses?

2019-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lea

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sometimes I am [Name] and Weaknesses. my sterngthens is that I have powerful body but my weaknesses is weak mind. for example. when I meet criminals, I am very strong man! because, I have sense of duty for save civil’s life, fight crime, maintain peace..etc...and I have tall height, and heavy weight, powerful hand power... etc.. but, when I meet the poor, and homeless people, I am bery weak man... because, I have weak mind and feel very sad during see them. I find all of thing, or everyway to help them. If I success to help them, I feel satisfaction, but when I fail to help them, I feel very weakness. and sad. that is my weaknesses part

강사 첨삭

HI THERE [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework even though I know that you are very busy. I really appreciate it! :-)

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sometimes I am [Name] and Weaknesses.
>> Sometimes I have my strengths and weaknesses.

my sterngthens is that I have powerful body
but my weaknesses is weak mind.
>> My strength is that I have a strong body, and my weakness is having a weak mind.

for example. when I meet criminals, I am very strong man!
>> For example, when I meet criminals, I have the ability to stop them for I have a strong body.

because, I have sense of duty for save civil’s life, fight crime, maintain peace..etc...and I have tall height, and heavy weight, powerful hand power... etc..
>> I am tall, my weight is heavy, and I have a strong hands to fight criminals.

but, when I meet the poor, and homeless people, I am bery weak man...
>> but when I meet poor and homeless people I pity them.

because, I have weak mind and feel very sad during see them.
>>because I have a weak mind and feel very sad for them.

I find all of thing, or everyway to help them.
>> I find ways to help them.

If I success to help them, I feel satisfaction, but when I fail to help them, I feel very weakness. and sad. 
>> If I succeed to help them I feel satisfied but when I failed to help them  I feel very weak and sad

 that is my weaknesses part
>> That is my weakness.

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