What do you think are your weaknesses and strengths?
학생이 쓴 원문
My strength is honest. When I have a lot of work that I really don\'t want to do, I have always done. I haven\'t the time that I didn\'t go when I have to go. On the othr hand, I\'m emotional and it\'s my weakness. Sometimes, it seemed like that I give my friends scars.
강사 첨삭
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Let\'s try to correct your sentences:
My strength is honest.
>> My strength is being honest.
When I have a lot of work that I really don\'t want to do, I have always done.
>> When I have a lot of works that I didn\'t do, I always do something to do it.
I haven\'t the time that I didn\'t go when I have to go.
>> I don\'t have enough time to go wherever I want to go.
On the other hand, I\'m emotional and it\'s my weakness.
>> Correct.
Sometimes, it seemed like that I give my friends scars.
>> Sometimes it seems that I give my friends a scar.
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