What do you think awaits the situation of the two Koreas in the next co[이름]g days?
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The north korea warned the south korea to destroy liaison office few days ago. But the south korea didn`t expect that they try to do it.
In fact, Inspite both country still at a war, It was a symbol of peace in contacting both parties.
That office was destroyed and they released related picture to the public. Actually, Most of south korean was dissapointed to their action. because the office was built with a lot of taxes. And Some people insist to withdraw economic supports anymore eventhough the normal public had no option to do it.
Theseday, I`m worry about get a damage from the north korea like misile etc and I think that it is not easy to make a chance to solve it with peaceful ways.
I expect that we need a time to restart to find ways.
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Nice to see you here JM! How are you today?
Indeed, the saga continues between your country and North Korea. As an Asian myself, who does not want peace and good relations with other neighboring countries? It is in keeping amiable relationships that we grow as a great continent altogether. However, we cannot force ideologies to the leaders of other countries
and expect them to think the same way as we do. We hope for peace and order for North and South Korea, and that one day there will be no more divisions and Korea will be as one once again.
Thanks for this composition. See you later in our class.
-T. Donna =)
>> North Korea warned South Korea to destroy liaison offices a few days ago.
In fact, Inspite both country still at a war, It was a symbol of peace in contacting both parties.
That office was destroyed and they released related picture to the public.
Theseday, I`m worry about get a damage from the north korea like misile etc and I think that it is not easy to make a chance to solve it with peaceful ways.
I expect that we need a time to restart to find ways.
But the south korea didn`t expect that they try to do it.
>> But South Korea didn\'t expect that they would do that.
In fact, Inspite both country still at a war, It was a symbol of peace in contacting both parties.
>> In fact, in spite both countries are still at war, it was a symbol of peace and connection for both parties.
That office was destroyed and they released related picture to the public.
>> That office was destroyed and they released a related picture of it to the public.
Actually, Most of south korean was dissapointed to their action. because the office was built with a lot of taxes.
>> Actually, most of South Koreans were disappointed to their action because the office was built with a lot of taxes.
And Some people insist to withdraw economic supports anymore eventhough the normal public had no option to do it.
>> Some people insist to withdraw economic support even though the normal public had no option to do it.
Theseday, I`m worry about get a damage from the north korea like misile etc and I think that it is not easy to make a chance to solve it with peaceful ways.
>> These days I worry about getting some damages from North Korea like missiles and the like. I think that it is not easy to make a change to solve it in peaceful ways.
I expect that we need a time to restart to find ways.
>> I expect for more time to restart and find other ways.
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