what do you think can done to help homeless people?
학생이 쓴 원문
There's very little I can do alone.
Even if I give them a little money, they'll be out of it.
I think that goverment should provide a space for community and job educations.
I intend to donate a little money regularly to such a place.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate,
Thank you for doing your homework.
Your answer in regarding with this topic is
really impressive. ^^
-Teacher Tricia
There\'s very little I can do alone.
>> CORRECT!
Even if I give them a little money, they\'ll be out of it.
>> Even if I give them a little amount of money, they\'ll run out of it.
I think that goverment should provide a space for community and job educations.
>> I think that the government should provide a space for the community and job educations.
I intend to donate a little money regularly to such a place.
>> I intend to donate a little amount of money regularly to such places.
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