What do you think dentists can do to make a visit more pleasurable?
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Wow! You are a good adviser.^^
I hope that a dentist will know about these strategies that will make their patients feel comfortable.
You are right! The doctors should administer anesthesia too.^^
Your thoughts are amazing! See you in class. Keep on writing! You are making my day!
Teacher Nina
Dental anxiety troubles many people.
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>> OR: Dental anxiety is one of the problems of many people.
It can affect people in varying degrees, ranging from mild anxiety to high levels of stress and emotional discomfort before or during scheduled visits.
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There are not many things that a dentist can do to make a visit more pleasurable because the thing that makes a patient scared is the pain he/she feels during the visit.
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Among the various types of pain, the toothache can often be associated with the nervous system, and the nerve pain is one of the worst pain.
>> Among the various types of pain, toothache can often be associated with the nervous system, and the nerve pain is one of the worst pain.
Speaking of what dentists can do to give a patient a less painful memory of visiting the dentist, they should specialize in treating nervous patients.
>> Speaking of what dentists can do to give a patient is a less painful memory of visiting the dentist. They should specialize in treating nervous patients.
We should be mildly sedated during the procedure.
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In addition, they should put a patient under thorough local anesthesia if necessary, so a patient feel numbed while being treated.
>> In addition, they should put the patient under local anesthesia if necessary, so the patient will feel numb while being treated.
>> OR: In addition, they should administer a local anesthesia to the patient if necessary, so the patient will not feel any pain while having the treatment.
The staff should always be friendly and informative.
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They should be welcoming and accommodating to make the patient feel more at ease as soon as he or she walks in.
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