What do you think do you need to do in order to achieve your goals in life?
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Good evening, Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
Hold on until tomorrow.
I am sure that you are looking forward to take a rest this weekend.
All of the things you mentioned below are right.
Thanks for a perfect composition.
You are right! Health is more important than wealth.
So, stay healthy and fit.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I am sometimes confused and wonder what my life goals are.
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What am I pursuing?
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For what am I living now?
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We start a morning in a hurry.
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We jump out of the door to go to work as a daily routine without giving a thought where we’re heading for in our life.
What are our life goals?
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Are they being successful and wealthy?
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What does success mean?
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People generally think that success is becoming a famous and high profile person.
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We all want to be highly regarded by others.
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We want to get promoted to a higher position that represents our social status.
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They could be politicians, business tycoons, celebrities, or professors.
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An example of such figures is Barack Obama, Steve Jobs, Brad Pitt & Angelina Jolie or Johns Hopkins.
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There are other people who might hold less the spotlight from the media, but sacrificed their lives for the poor and the under-privileged.
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When I was younger, I had big dreams.
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However, I’m now thinking that staying healthy is more important than anything else.
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