What do you think future wars will be fought over?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Your perspective on the potential causes of future wars is thought-provoking. It\'s true that as resources become scarcer, conflicts over essentials like water, food, and energy may increase. It\'s essential for us to work towards sustainable solutions to avoid such scenarios.
~Teacher Cathy
My answer is very simple.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My answer is really straightforward.
the cause of the war in the future is water, food and energy include the technology.
>>In the future, wars could be triggered by the scarcity of resources like water, food, energy, and technology
In past century, the humankind fought with enemy for land or religions etc.
>>In the past century, humans often engaged in conflict over land, religion, and other reasons.
However in the future, we, humankind, will face a very critical shortage of everything, above all the kind of resources for living, water, food.
>>However, in the future, humanity will confront a critical shortage of essential resources for survival, primarily water and food.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.