What do you think is going to happen in your life next year?

2021-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I will study hard. Because I want to go great university in Korea. And maybe covid19 is ended, I will go to the concert of my favorite idol.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Many people are hoping for the same thing as well. I hope it would come true. Thanks for sharing. :)

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I think I will study hard. Because I want to go great university in Korea.

>>I think I will study hard because I want to go to a great university in South Korea.

And maybe covid19 is ended, I will go to the concert of my favorite idol.

>> And maybe the pandemic will be over and I will to the concert of favorite idol.

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