What do you think is more "important" for you in your work, the training you have or the experience

2016-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think experience is more important than training at work. Training is one of the tools you need to do your work. However, in general, training offers a basic guideline or overall introduction, so that you might have a difficulty directly implementing it on your actual daily work. Our actual work often requires field experience because training usually cannot cover all the details or variances that actually happen in our daily operations. Thinking about the things or text books you have learned at school, we had to re-learn them at work because there were gaps or differences between the books and actual work. However, training plays a critical role in developing our career. The industries advance rapidly and our experience and skills should be sharpened and updated not to be out of date. If we are solely dependent on our experience not focusing on getting training, we will be getting losing our competency and falling behind in the competition. Trainin is investment for the future.

강사 첨삭


Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday! Yipee!

I want to say thank you for this wonderful week with you.

I am excited to hear lots of stories and your wonderful insights next week,

You are definitely right. ^^ Training is really important.

So if there are new trainings that we can participate in that is related to our job or for future purposes, we should grab it.

Have a wonderful day.

Take care.
Teacher Nina


I think experience is more important than training at work.

>> correct

Training is one of the tools you need to do your work.

>> correct

However, in general, training offers a basic guideline or overall introduction, so that you might have a difficulty directly implementing it on your actual daily work.

>> correct 

Our actual work often requires field experience because training usually cannot cover all the details or variances that actually happen in our daily operations.

>> correct

Thinking about the things or text books you have learned at school, we had to re-learn them at work because there were gaps or differences between the books and actual work.

>> correct

However, training plays a critical role in developing our career.

>> correct

The industries advance rapidly and our experience and skills should be sharpened and updated not to be out of date.

>> The industries advance rapidly and our experience and skills should be sharpened and updated in order not to be out of date.

If we are solely dependent on our experience not focusing on getting training, we will be getting losing our competency and falling behind in the competition.

>> correct

Trainin is investment for the future.

>> Training is an investment for the future.

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