What do you think is most important for a happy childhood?
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Babies don\'t know what makes them happy. They even don\'t know how to speak, but they can communicate with others by expressing their emotion with many ways. I think the most important thing for a happy childhood is friends and family. Children feel happy when they play and learn something. I remember a little about my childhood that I was excited. Most of time, I had time with my family and friends. It was the my valuable memory in my heart.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer in my question.
I really appreciate it. ^^
I agree that having friends and family is very important in one\'s childhood.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a great weekend! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
They even don\'t know how to speak, but they can communicate with others by expressing their emotion with many ways.
>> CORRECT.
I think the most important thing for a happy childhood is friends and family.
>> I think the most important thing for a happy childhood is having friends and family.
>> Or: I think the most important things for a happy childhood are friends and family.
Children feel happy when they play and learn something.
>> CORRECT.
I remember a little about my childhood that I was excited.
>> I remember a little about my childhood when I was excited.
Most of time, I had time with my family and friends.
>> CORRECT.
It was the my valuable memory in my heart.
>> It was a valuable memory in my heart.
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