What do you think is the best age to be?
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i think 20s is the best age to be. because we can get to be supported by our parents.
>> I think being in our 20s is the best age to be in because we are being supported by our parents.
so if we wanna do something, depends on time we can be supported.
>> If we want to do something, it will depend whether we can be supported or not.
if they can\'t support the money, we can take a part-time job and save money too.
>> If our money is not enough, we can apply for part time jobs and save our own money.
all the ages can do anythings, but i think 20s is the best!
>> I think that we can do anything no matter what our age is, but I think being in your 20s is the best.
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