What do you think is the best age to be?
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I think age of high school student is the best age to be.
Because on this age, we don’t have to consider something except studying
And i think it’s the age which can change my life more dramatically because on this age a college is determined and major too
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WRITING TASK: What do you think is the best age to be?
Because on this age, we don’t have to consider something except studying
And i think it’s the age which can change my life more dramatically because on this age a college is determined and major too
I think age of high school student is the best age to be.
>> I think high school age or ages around 15 to 19 years old is the best age to be.
Because on this age, we don’t have to consider something except studying
>> Because at this age, we don’t have to consider anything except studying.
And i think it’s the age which can change my life more dramatically because on this age a college is determined and major too
>> And I think it’s the age that changed my life dramatically because at this age, I had to determine what Major I was going to take up in College.
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