What do you think is the best age to be?
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I am in the middle of human\'s life. I mean that my life expectation is around 80 to 90 years old and I am already early 40th.
When I was a student, I thought I could do anything, if I became adults. But I realized that it didn\'t happen. I always have a major concern until now. Whenever I solve the problem, the things I would be worried came to my life. Even though, human has concerns every moments, I would say that teenagers are bests time for me in my life. I thought it was the most difficult things to study at school, but it is the easiest one to do now. I don\'t want to go to work in the morning. I would like to go to the school and hang out with my friends without any concerns except worry for entering university. I don\'t have to worry about money and my family.
If I could go back to past time, I would like to be a high school student.
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I am in the middle of human\'s life. >> I am middle-aged.
I mean that my life expectation is around 80 to 90 years old and I am already early 40th.
>> I mean that my life expectation is around 80 to 90 years old and I am already in my early 40\'s.
When I was a student, I thought I could do anything, if I became adults.
When I was a student, I thought I could do anything, if I became adults.
>> When I was a student, I thought I could do anything if I became an adult.
But I realized that it didn\'t happen. I always have a major concern until now.
>> Correct
Whenever I solve the problem, the things I would be worried came to my life.
>> Whenever I solve a problem, the things I would be worried about come to my life.
Even though, human has concerns every moments, I would say that teenagers are bests time for me in my life.
>> Even though humans have concerns every time, I would say my teenage life was the best time of my life.
I thought it was the most difficult things to study at school, but it is the easiest one to do now.
>> I thought it was the most difficult thing to study at school, but it is the easiest one to do now.
I don\'t want to go to work in the morning.
>> Correct
I would like to go to the school and hang out with my friends without any concerns except worry for entering university.
>> I would like to go to the school and hang out with my friends without any concerns except entering the university.
I don\'t have to worry about money and my family.
>> Correct
If I could go back to past time, I would like to be a high school student.
If I could go back to past time, I would like to be a high school student.
>> if I could go back to the past, I would like to be a high school student.
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