What do you think is the best city in Korea and why?
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I think it is Seoul. Because Seoul is the most improved city in Korea. And there is so many delicious things and there is various thing to enjoy.
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Hi Kane! ^^
Yes, I heard that that city is a great place. I can\'t wait to go there someday. Thanks for sharing. ^^
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I think it is Seoul. Because Seoul is the most improved city in Korea.
>> I think it is Seoul because it is the most improve city in South Korea.
And there is so many delicious things and there is various thing to enjoy.
>> There are many delicious food and various things to enjoy here as well.
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