What do you think is the best company to work at in your country and why?
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I think the best company communicates well. It\'s because South Korea is a Confucian culture, so it\'s hard to give opinions to older people. :(
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Hi Elic :)
Oh, I was not aware of this. It is important to work in a place where different ideas are catered. This kind of culture should be changed.
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I think the best company communicates well.
>> I think the best company to work for is the one that has an environment that communicates well.
It\'s because South Korea is a Confucian culture, so it\'s hard to give opinions to older people. :(
> It\'s because South Korea has the Confucian culture, so it\'s hard to give opinions to older people. :(
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