What do you think is the best country in the world and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best country is Sweden. It\'s because that country\'s welfare is the best in the world. But I have to pay half of my salary in taxes. So far, I guess it\'s a good thing. Because I can\'t receive the national pension from my generation. The main reason that Korea is aging now and the birth rate is decrea[이름]g.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
I would love to live in that country as well. They are well disciplined.
I think the best country is Sweden.
>> CORRECT
It\'s because that country\'s welfare is the best in the world.
>> CORRECT
But I have to pay half of my salary in taxes.
>> If I live there, I have to pay half of my salary in taxes.
So far, I guess it\'s a good thing.
>> CORRECT
Because I can\'t receive the national pension from my generation.
>> It\'s because here in South Korea, I can\'t receive the national pension from my generation.
The main reason that Korea is aging now and the birth rate is decrea[이름]g.
>> The main reason that South Koreas populations is decrea[이름]g and the birth rate is decrea[이름]g.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.