What do you think is the best job? How about the worst job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best job is programmer. Because nowadays our life is with technology. So we need to programming technology. And I think worst job is nothing. Because many people has a their job, so I can\'t say talk about worst job. I think it is not good things. All the job is for in order to live.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Daisy!
You are a smart girl. I love the way you expressed your thought without offending anyone and I totally agree with you.
Keep being kind! That is rare to find to people these days :)
See you in class.
See you in class.
T. Aki~
I think the best job is programmer.
>>> I think the best job is a programmer.
Because nowadays our life is with technology.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> Because nowadays our life is connected with technology.
So we need to programming technology.
>>> So we need to program technology.
And I think worst job is nothing.
>>> And I think the worst job is nothing.
Because many people has a their job, so I can\'t say talk about worst job.
>>> Because many people have their jobs, so I can\'t say about the worst job.
I think it is not good things.
>>> I think it is not a good thing.
All the job is for in order to live.
>>> We all have jobs in order to live.
>>> We all have jobs in order to survive
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