What do you think is the best job in the world?
학생이 쓴 원문
Although I think all legitimate trades are equally honorable, jobs seeking public interests are more honorable than seeking private interests.
I think people who sacrifice themselves working relief organizations, volunteer organizations and environmental organizations to serve to their society are really wonderful.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. This was an awesome read. Thank you for catching up to your homework. Keep it up and have a good one. See you tomorrow in class ~teacher Jane c\",)
Although I think all legitimate trades are equally honorable, jobs seeking public interests are more honorable than seeking private interests.
>>> CORRECT =)
I think people who sacrifice themselves working relief organizations, volunteer organizations and environmental organizations to serve to their society are really wonderful.
>>> I think people who sacrifice themselves working in relief organizations, volunteer organizations, and environmental organizations to serve their society are really wonderful.
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