What do you think is the best job in the world? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best job is a legal profession because they lead a peaceful world by law.
Ther are punish criminals and help the victim.
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What do you think is the best job in the world? Explain.
I think the best job is a legal profession because they lead a peaceful world by law.
>> OR: For me, the legal profession is the best because these professionals maintain peace in the country.
Ther are punish criminals and help the victim.
>> They punish criminals and help victims.
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