What do you think is the best job in the world? Why?

2022-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I can\'t actually choose the best job in the world, but for me, author is the best job. Because I can work freely and also I like to write some stories by my own. I can imagine my own thoughts, and also I can earn a lot of money if I succeed. Because of these reasons, I think author is the best job for me.

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I can\'t actually choose the best job in the world, but for me, author is the best job.

>> I can\'t actually choose the best job in the world, but for me, being an author is the best job.

Because I can work freely and also I like to write some stories by my own.

>> It is because I can work freely and I also writing some storied of my own.

I can imagine my own thoughts, and also I can earn a lot of money if I succeed.

>> CORRECT

Because of these reasons, I think author is the best job for me.

>> Because of these reasons, I think being an author is the best job for me.

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