What do you think is the best place to live in?
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Recently with the Pandemic situation, I thought Korea is one of the good country to live in which I didn\'t know.
The health insurance is well organized. So the hospital and the medicine price is cheaper than comparing to other countries.
There are less people who had infection to the disease because of people\'s behavior and well following manners wearing masks all the time and also there are less influence to the economy impact by the government\'s quick and appropriate demand.
So I felt lucky that I was living in this country.
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The health insurance is well organized so the hospital and medicine prices are cheaper compared to other countries.
There are less people who had infection to the disease because of people\'s behavior and well following manners wearing masks all the time and also there are less influence to the economy impact by the government\'s quick and appropriate demand.
So I felt lucky that I was living in this country.
Recently with the Pandemic situation, I thought Korea is one of the good country to live in which I didn\'t know.
>> Recently, with the pandemic, Korea is a good country to live in.
The health insurance is well organized so the hospital and medicine prices are cheaper compared to other countries.
>> CORRECT
So the hospital and the medicine price is cheaper than comparing to other countries.
>> (CONNECT THIS WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE)
There are less people who had infection to the disease because of people\'s behavior and well following manners wearing masks all the time and also there are less influence to the economy impact by the government\'s quick and appropriate demand.
>>CORRECT
So I felt lucky that I was living in this country.
>> I feel so lucky that I live in this country.
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