What do you think is the best season to visit your country?
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I think, Middle of spring is the best season to visit Korea. If you have a plan to visit Korea, I recommend to visit Korea in April or May. There are so many flowers festivals during that season. Weather is good as well. If china doesn\'t send fine dusts to Korea, your visiting is going to be great.
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I think, Middle of spring is the best season to visit Korea.
>> I think, middle of spring is the best season to visit Korea.
If you have a plan to visit Korea, I recommend to visit Korea in April or May.
>> CORRECT!
There are so many flowers festivals during that season.
>> There are so many flower festivals during that season.
Weather is good as well.
>> CORRECT!
If china doesn\'t send fine dusts to Korea, your visiting is going to be great.
>> If China doesn\'t send fine dusts to Korea, your trip is going to be great.
OR >> If China doesn\'t send fine dusts to Korea, your trip would be great.
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